tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post8843346664384190967..comments2024-01-31T03:22:58.140-05:00Comments on Lost In Reality: I TEASE Therefore I Am...A TEASE, That Is...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13612218172442721987noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-12213103201270433642010-05-07T17:58:45.232-04:002010-05-07T17:58:45.232-04:00Wow. You hooked me, played me, and reeled me right...Wow. You hooked me, played me, and reeled me right in. Good work! :)Linda G.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04576828490765434497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-40098367810700761862010-05-06T04:45:16.154-04:002010-05-06T04:45:16.154-04:00Absolutely gorgeous. So emotiove.Absolutely gorgeous. So emotiove.Kathy Bradeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01370707259209847339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-81360554669566815212010-05-05T07:11:06.263-04:002010-05-05T07:11:06.263-04:00The raw emotion in this. Man ... so sad :( Loved t...The raw emotion in this. Man ... so sad :( Loved this teaser, KarlaGlen Akinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09647296775230237162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-11024266765349753142010-05-05T00:52:05.790-04:002010-05-05T00:52:05.790-04:00Oooh, this is awesome! Love how intense the emotio...Oooh, this is awesome! Love how intense the emotions are..and the ending, BAM! Really gripping!Debra Drizahttp://www.houndrat.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-16059714249135279682010-05-04T20:38:43.546-04:002010-05-04T20:38:43.546-04:00Wonderful writing, this is really addictive stuff....Wonderful writing, this is really addictive stuff. Great tease!!Caitlinhttp://caitlindarrell.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-65183888376283349142010-05-04T16:51:13.811-04:002010-05-04T16:51:13.811-04:00Karla, you've conformed? Oh my gosh, it's ...Karla, you've conformed? Oh my gosh, it's time for me to go pick up my flying pig! lol <br /><br />Anyway, this teaser was lovely, and it also made me very sad and teary-eyed. I really liked the last line. My heart is breaking for Hannah.Remilda Graystonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13649300813621588790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-51767479840361088282010-05-04T16:17:25.242-04:002010-05-04T16:17:25.242-04:00Loved the last few lines.Loved the last few lines.Little Miss Allicatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13198240162763549729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-27058935766519671362010-05-04T15:41:47.444-04:002010-05-04T15:41:47.444-04:00I love this SO much. The emotions seem so real. I ...I love this SO much. The emotions seem so real. I agree the last two lines are so haunting.Karla Calalanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17414349286625200655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-7792421339544979462010-05-04T15:05:02.696-04:002010-05-04T15:05:02.696-04:00This is perfect. I work in a high school where th...This is perfect. I work in a high school where there's actually a similar situation... I won't go into details. But, yeah, it would be really hard for a sibling to have to deal with everyone memorializing their dead sister every day. Very. Well. Done.Jill Wheelerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15059527254551768150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-72451351744863640692010-05-04T13:22:44.758-04:002010-05-04T13:22:44.758-04:00You wrote her emotions very well. I felt like I wa...You wrote her emotions very well. I felt like I was her. And I love how she's upset that her sister is gone, yet she's pissed at her for being selfish by commiting suicide. Nicely done. :D <33Rebecca A. Rogershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14124059241043445352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-71900862465104623732010-05-04T11:41:37.806-04:002010-05-04T11:41:37.806-04:00I was literally hanging on everyword! GREAT writin...I was literally hanging on everyword! GREAT writing!! I was so sucked in by the emotion rolling through her. :DAnnie McElfreshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14312634754232333138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-8943241734003201402010-05-04T11:33:24.548-04:002010-05-04T11:33:24.548-04:00"I was dry…desiccated…the Sahara." Such ..."I was dry…desiccated…the Sahara." Such a great line... And agreed, the last two were also chilling, in a good way.<br />We, the people, demand more. *nods*Ellenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13922830118401456927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-52181793585227106492010-05-04T11:17:28.753-04:002010-05-04T11:17:28.753-04:00The last two lines... so haunting. I love this!The last two lines... so haunting. I love this!Lia Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04316015024213640823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-87784381010971271312010-05-04T11:02:29.660-04:002010-05-04T11:02:29.660-04:00I forgot about this one. Wahhh it's so sad. Mo...I forgot about this one. Wahhh it's so sad. More more more. This is clearly more important than building contracts!LizPagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07863167617453436250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3049843947098881146.post-9361809599352485332010-05-04T10:30:38.234-04:002010-05-04T10:30:38.234-04:00Wow! I was sad and heartbroken reading this, and t...Wow! I was sad and heartbroken reading this, and then I get to the last few lines and I was just totally blown away.<br /><br />Great tease! It gave me chills.Cheyannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05924234364835409650noreply@blogger.com