Tuesday, March 16, 2010

With great teasing comes great responsibility...

Hmm...Arrogant, aren't I? Okay, so I must admit that I almost forgot! Never fear, for I am here!

Okay, okay. Enough with the egomaniacal chatter. On with the show...

***Onto the next tease! Thanks for all your comments guys!***


  1. Freaky!!

    I have to say that I LOVE this line:

    "And, there for damned sure won’t be two hot brothers crashing in at any moment to save the day.”

    LMAO!! I wish those Supernatural brothers would crash into my house. ;)


  2. Holy crap! What a thriller and I have to wonder if the whole book will be this intense.

    I like the line Becca liked too :)

  3. Damn! And I thought I was the only writer who had a dark imagination. Turns out you do too, Karla!

    Great teaser!

  4. I have to echo Becca, I loved this.

    "And, there for damned sure won’t be two hot brothers crashing in at any moment to save the day.”

    Really intense, great teaser Karla

  5. “You’re not in an episode of Supernatural, Jacks.” I tell myself with a laugh."

    I laughed out loud when I read that part, because I was just thinking about how this reminded me of Supernatural.

    I really liked this! I'm pretty sure I'm hooked.

  6. This is so, so creepy it freaked me out. Lovely writing -great mix of flow and tension!

  7. I loveee how we dive into the plot here! Yayy. Where is that little midget bastard?

  8. Okay I completely LOVE this for a few reasons:

    1) Your writing kicks ass
    2)You used phrases like heebie jeebies. (Which made me LOL Btw)

    And #3) I am the biggest supernatural fangirl in the whole world. LOL Me hearts Dean and Sam!

    Great snip.

  9. Oooh. This gave me shivers! Like...actual shivers, not just a figure of speech. For some reason the fact that water is everywhere is especially creepy. I don't know why.

    Great snip!

  10. I must comment again. I am SO proud to have dragged you screaming into the land of supernatural and the unholy, ungodly, hothothot relationship between sam and dean.
    You know you love me for pointing out the exact (4) episodes where they take their clothes off.

  11. Wonderful teaser, Karla. I loved the very last line. Totally creepy, totally awesome :D

  12. Damn. That was ridiculously good. I have a scene kind of like this one in the project I'm currently rewriting, but it's not nearly as good as yours. I was completely absorbed. Kudos to you.

    By the way, I love Supernatural.

  13. Okay, so you had me totally freaked out. I don't usually like scary things, because I have a wild imagination and will now be terrified of my bathtub, but I couldn't peel my eyes away. You have such a great combination of tension and humor!! Wow, my heart is still racing. Great tease!


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