Tuesday, April 6, 2010

For my next trick, I shall TEASE...

Here we go again. First, I'd like to thank all my lovelies that follow me and comment on my posts, teases or not. You always make me feel better when I'm strongly considering throwing a pity party for myself. I heart each and every one of you!!

Now, on with the show. Yes, I am still teasing from my gnome-infested novel, THROUGH THE LOOKING GLASS. And, no, it is nowhere near completion. Felix keeps messing up my outline, the little bastard :(

This scene comes shortly after last week's snip. Jacki leaves Felix at her house so she can get to school, but an innocent morning greeting to Mari Calpher (the scary half of the Redrum twins) turns into a confrontation Jacki really isn't prepared for, especially after all the craziness that has happened so far.

Enjoy!!

**snip! snap! thanks for the feedback! you guys are made entirely of AWESOME!!**

11 comments:

  1. I really like this. You have painted such a vivid scene, and I love how her emotions are so fixed by what is going on then changes with Mr. Smooth Simon, lol. I'll be really interested to see where this goes!

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  2. This is really good, Karla. I really love how Felix comes to the rescue in the end - so cool. I love that gnome to bits, and I really hate that bitch, Mari haha!

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  3. Oh, this was great! Love this: She snaps back, her cold voice sinking into me to claw at my insides with evil intent.

    Very curious about their powers, especially with her so drawn to the other guy.

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  4. Would you hurry up and write more of this so I can read it? lol. You know I love this. I just think Felix could be such a ridiculous character, but you build him so well that I completely forget how insane it should sound :)

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  5. FELIX SAVES THE DAY---WOOT! :D And I hate the twins--they need a good shanking! I'm so curious how they know who Elvis is!

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  6. I love the gnome. Completely original premise. Great tease!

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  7. Ooo - another good last line! Great tease.

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  8. This was really good. Did I say I love your writing style before? No? Well, I do. It's awesome, and I love the character you've created--I'm pretty sure I said that at some point, but it doesn't matter. It needs to be repeated. You have an awesome main character!

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