Tuesday, March 23, 2010

If You Tease, They Will Read...Hopefully :)

Okay, so this week, we say hello to my little friend! This is yet another scene from my current WIP (work-in-progress), THROUGH THE LOOKING GLASS, and it's where we meet for the very first time one of my all-time favorite characters that I have written.

Enjoy!


***thanks for all your comments guys! You're all wonderful!!***

11 comments:

  1. I love this! I didn't know whether to laugh or be really really creeped out and I loved the conflicting feelings!

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  2. I agree with Vero. I think I lean towards the more creeped out than laughing but it was amazing. I really like the voices here.

    Lynkay

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  3. This is tense and I laughed at this line "I am going to die…here, at the hands of a lawn ornament."

    I don't know if you intended it but you mixed humor and suspense together exceedingly well!

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  4. Evil garden gnomes... that's great! The tone of this definitely mixes shocked humor with terror very, very well indeed.

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  5. Yayyyy I love this part. He's so hysterical and now I miss her inner voice. Write more please.

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  6. Hah, I love this character of yours--and the gnome sounds cool too! :D Um...I have no idea where this is going. I THOUGHT I did, but I don't know anymore. All I do know is--if you need a beta for this, I'm totally here and ready!

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  7. This is like a comedic horror genre or something. I loved it. Not too overly done with the creepiness or the hilarity. :)

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  8. WOWEE!! Me loooooooves stories like this! This is exactly the kind of thing I'd choose to read! Great snip, and your writing is AWESOME!

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  9. This was a fun read! I really liked it! :D

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  10. This made me laugh, especially the line about the lawn ornament. Great tease!

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  11. Probably the best teaser I've read this week. Started out tense but ended up being funny. I agree with the gnome - your MC is one funny witch lol

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