Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Just Another Teaser Tuesday....

Okay....So great news! Broken is finished...well the first draft anyways. It is being sent onto my kick-ass Beta today. Here is today's snip. Enjoy!

***snippy, snippy!! thanks for all your feedback! You guys rock!***

13 comments:

  1. Love the cute exchange about being first in line for the shower and the singing. :D Some serious introspection here by your MC. I kinda miss the sexy counselor, tho! :D

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  2. "Pain meant feeling and feeling meant life. I wanted to live." Great sentences Karla. Makes me empathise/pull for your MC. You had some gorgeous descriptions in here, eg. muscles rebelled against the after effects etc, shower coughed and spluttered etc. Great teaser.

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  3. loved the relationship between the two girls!

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  4. Good snip! I especially loved the end where the MC is talking about escaping down the rabbit whole with her old friend. Good metaphors. The last line was just...poignant.

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  5. Great snip, Karla! And how you write so fast, I'll never know. Color me jealous!

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  6. it better be sent to me today!
    and the last line, you know why it's killing me.
    i love parallels :)
    i love this scene, aw luce...

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  7. "An acquired taste." Teehee. :D

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  8. Funny exchange, love the "need more practice."

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  9. Great snip. I'm left wondering if that's why she was really sleeping in the bathroom. And I like the image of the rabbit hole too - great metaphor. :)

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  10. As usual, another great teaser. I wonder why she was sleeping in the bathroom though? I love stories like this that centre on characters and open them up. It's beautiful. And congrats on finishing broken!

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  11. Your snip made me giggle a few times! Great job. Love the voice. Congrats on finishing your rough draft! It sounds pretty awesome already :D

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  12. Loved the rabbit hole line, but definitely loved the last line. Congrats on finishing! :D

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  13. I love your character's voice! The last few paragraphs were really great!

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