Karla of House Nellenbach, First of Her Name, the Uncool, Queen of Sarcasm, Treadmill Battles, and the First Cup of Coffee, Khalessi of the Great Gray Toyota, Breaker of Lawnmowers, Mother of Dogs (and one Cranky Cat).
These are my words. This is my life. You have been warned.
Oh man! Poor dad, lol. I can see this has a lot of layers. Nice lines with these: Yes, we loved each other, but we just weren’t the kind of people to hug and kiss and tell each other ‘I love you’. We just weren’t the emotional sort. So, with her softly uttered declaration, the block of ice that I had been melted, and I broke down.
OMG how sad!!! D:
ReplyDeleteYou know I loveeee this part and cried here.
ReplyDeleteGod when I beta this I'm gonna need so many tissues.
how upsetting!!! :(
ReplyDeleteVery good, loved the details. And the characters are nicely created in this scene (if they weren't before).
ReplyDeleteOh man! Poor dad, lol. I can see this has a lot of layers. Nice lines with these: Yes, we loved each other, but we just weren’t the kind of people to hug and kiss and tell each other ‘I love you’. We just weren’t the emotional sort.
ReplyDeleteSo, with her softly uttered declaration, the block of ice that I had been melted, and I broke down.
Sad...I found myself really hoping Dad doesn't die!
ReplyDeleteVery sad, but packed with tension.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene, Karla! Very heartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteVery sad and emotional. You're gonna make us rename it Tearjerker Tuesday!
ReplyDeleteAwww! I will. not. cry.
ReplyDeleteEmotional stuff... I love it! Hehe (sad laughter). Very nice teaser!
ReplyDeleteWhat an emotional passage! Very nice!
ReplyDeleteSuch an emotional ride reading this... :'[ (but very nicely done!)
ReplyDelete*snif* This is so sad...but good! Great snip!
ReplyDeleteOh, wow--poor MC! Intense snip!
ReplyDeleteThe emotion was definitely all there! Great snip!
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