Tuesday, January 12, 2010

Teaser Tuesday...Take Two!!

Here is another snippet from my WIP Broken....Enjoy!

****snip snap, thanks for the feedback!!!****
(okay, so I know that doesn't rhyme...but it's fun to say!)

16 comments:

  1. You know I loveeee this part and cried here.
    God when I beta this I'm gonna need so many tissues.

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  2. Very good, loved the details. And the characters are nicely created in this scene (if they weren't before).

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  3. Oh man! Poor dad, lol. I can see this has a lot of layers. Nice lines with these: Yes, we loved each other, but we just weren’t the kind of people to hug and kiss and tell each other ‘I love you’. We just weren’t the emotional sort.
    So, with her softly uttered declaration, the block of ice that I had been melted, and I broke down.

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  4. Sad...I found myself really hoping Dad doesn't die!

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  5. Very sad, but packed with tension.

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  6. Great scene, Karla! Very heartbreaking.

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  7. Very sad and emotional. You're gonna make us rename it Tearjerker Tuesday!

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  8. Emotional stuff... I love it! Hehe (sad laughter). Very nice teaser!

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  9. What an emotional passage! Very nice!

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  10. Such an emotional ride reading this... :'[ (but very nicely done!)

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  11. *snif* This is so sad...but good! Great snip!

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  12. The emotion was definitely all there! Great snip!

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