Tuesday, February 9, 2010

I'm such a TEASE...and you love it!

It's that time of week again! Yay...Again, I am snipping from my YA paranormal romance The Unknown. This scene really doesn't need an intro. So, here you are! As always, any and all comments are welcome. Have fun with it!

***snippy, snippy! onto the next installment! thanks for all your comments!***

9 comments:

  1. "No, I'm not a witch."
    "I'm an angel."

    HA! This was great and intriguing, and the writing was addicting. Niiice :)

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  2. I so didn't think that was going to be what he was going to say. I love Angel stories. I'm hooked!

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  3. I had so much fun reading this.
    More, please.

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  4. Such a beautiful image at the end! These scenes are hard to write (when one character is revealing supernatural information to another character), but I think you did well!

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  5. Lol Loved every bit of it. He tells her he's not a witch. She's laughing and glad. Then he tells her he's an angel. That made me laugh. Lovely writing, too

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  6. Love the imagery of the wings at the end. And hey, angel has to be better than witch, right? Um...

    :)

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  7. I love that last line she says. Really nice way to show her disbelief

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  8. Cool teaser; there's humor in here and that's always good!

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  9. You know I love this. I picked this! I love me some half naked Luke.

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