Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Hi! My name is Karla, and I'm a TEASE...

Okay, so this snip is from early in The Unknown (like the first chapter). Enjoy!

***snip! snap! thanks for the feedback!!****

13 comments:

  1. Did you link on AW? I was looking for it lol.
    I'm so glad you did this one! I remember being so excited here.

    Ehem...gnomes? Never roam alone?
    My code is dingo. Like...dingo ate my baby crazy...like mystery spot tuesday...epic love story...im done

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  2. Um I LOVE this and I want more! Much much more please. Thank you! :)

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  3. Dude, this was great! I LOVE Lily's voice and the interaction with the other kids. And her brother's joking. I just love it. Can I have some more please?!?!?!?!?!

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  4. Can you plz continue from here for the next teaser? I want to know more.
    Loved how Gabe saved her from herself. The internal dialogue says a lot about your MC :D

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  5. Love your MC's inner voice!

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  6. Oh, that's messed up. Why end it there?

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  7. Ha! Why not? sigh...I know, I know. I wasn't going to tease from The Unknown for much longer, but I'm thinking I must for at least a little while longer. And, yes, I will pick up next week where this one left off. Paitence, young grasshoppers! lol :)

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  8. Yes!!! That makes me feel better haha

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  9. This was absolutely wonderful.
    The voice was so great and refreshing, you definitely had me hooked!

    Great tease!

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  10. Man, you keep teasing like this and people are going to get mad that they don't have the complete book in their hands! :)

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  11. Such a tease! Voice was unique, and I loved every bit of this snip.

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  12. Your MC's voice is so great! I love the descriptions too. Great tease!

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