Tuesday, March 30, 2010

There is only one word for what I do best...well, most anyway: TEASE

A little scene set up: This comes shortly after last week's snip in which Jacki finds a very irritable little man in her bathroom. Here is just one more layer of craziness and by the end of this scene, she's pretty sure she's ready for a padded room

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10 comments:

  1. Ahahaah I love the picture. I just love him so much, he's so cocky and makes me laugh at loud at how oblivious he is to how crazy he looks.

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  2. omg what does that mean?! Great way to end the teaser. Loved it!

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  3. LMFAO! I want a gard--AHEM--guardian gnome! :D LOVE this! <3

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  4. the trauma of being assaulted by an irate midget <-- From here i'm hooked and giggling. I love it

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  5. This was quirky and funny---the cocky little gnome cracks me up! And man, I would be srsly traumatized by stumbling inot my bathroom to see THAT first thing in the morning--EEEEEK! :D

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  6. The garden/guardian gnome idea is hilarious. Very cool!

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  7. You know, if you keep posting such awesome teasers, I'll quickly run out of words to describe how much I love them! But I really liked this teaser. My favorite line was: Sitting on the toilet, pants around his ankles, and my Seventeen magazine open in front of him is the angry little gnome from my dreams last night.

    Something about a Guardian gnome reading Seventeen magazine makes me laugh.

    Great tease!

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  8. LMAO!! Best tease ever! The most unlikely tag-team heroes - a clueless witch and a pissed-off gnome. Sorry, guardian. Felix Findersnoop lmao!

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  9. "Jabbing a stubby finger into my shin..."

    LOL! Great tease. I always think teases are a shrewd move - not too much to deter reader & not enough to satisfy. Way to keep us wanting more!

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  10. LMAO! He was sitting on the toilet with her mag! Yuck---but funny! I love his attitude and the way your MC handles him. :D

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