Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Tearjerker Tuesday Teaser...Say That Three Times Fast!

I've come to the conclusion that tragedy comes easy for me. I don't know why, but I'm just going to go with it :) This snip picks up where last week's left off. Hope you have tissues handy!

**snip, snap! thanks for the feedback!!**

16 comments:

  1. This is so beautifully written. It's intense and heartbreaking and pitched perfectly!

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  2. Wow. Terribly gut-wrenching. :(

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  3. I love the voice in this and how well you show the MCs anger and frustration.

    And the last line - perfect.

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  4. You did a great job showing the MC's inner turmoil here.

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  5. Awwwww,now I'm sad! The voice so lovely!!

    Well done! :)

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  6. Love that first paragraph. It really sucks you in, and the rest is so sad. Lovely teaser!

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  7. Guh. I love this part. I don't love so much how I cry every time you send me something :) Orange dino is on his way!

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  8. I like how she's always talking to the dead character. It really helps me to understand where she's coming from.

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  9. I'm too old to be crying, but screw it, I'm shedding some tears after reading this. Wonderful, wonderful piece of writing. And a what a sad day it is for your MC.

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  10. Oh man, so intense and sad :( ... which means I loved it. Especially this part:

    "The only tragedy here lay in the fact that you were supremely selfish. I never realized it until just then, but you are the most selfish person I’ve ever known."

    So honest, and heartbreaking.

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  11. Awww, so heartbreakingly beautiful. I love this. It's so sad though!

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  12. Dear lord, Karla! Where do I begin with this, where do I begin? Well, I'd like to point out all the sentences I loved, but that'd take forever! That and the fact that I'm not sure I could fit the entire snippet in this itty-bitty space.

    Your writing style is magnificent. Seriously. The way you describe the emotions and actions of your characters--the awesomeness with which you describe these things makes me want to cry!

    I loved it all. Really, this piece was great and sad and intense and beautifully written.

    More please.

    P.S. It's her twin that died??? That's absolutely tragic.

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  13. Wow, powerful stuff here. So sad, and such great imagery, too. We really get inside your MC's head. Awesome!

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  14. Loved this line "I shed invisible tears for you because the well of me was bone dry."

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  15. Thanks for reading and commenting guys! I <33333 each and every one of you!

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