Hello All! This is my first Teaser Tuesday. As such, I had my wonderful beta select today's snippet. It comes from my current work-in-progress Broken. It is Skelly's first night in rehab, and as you can imagine, she definitely is not at all sure she wants to be there.
Happy reading!
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I really pictured it all beautifully! Great writing!
ReplyDeleteYayyy! You know I love this chapter and the tap-tap-tap of her fingers. And JR. I almost forgot about her candy addiction.
ReplyDeleteYou know who should bring candy when they move in.
I love Edgy YA and this seems just the thing with the rehab setting and all.
ReplyDeleteThis line just stuck with me --"All the shooters crave chocolate"
And wow, that's a charming counseller!
WOW!! I love this type of YA story, very real. Nice work :)
ReplyDeleteWho is this JR creature? I have a thing for bad boys. ;) Glad you joined TT!! :D
ReplyDeleteNice 'strange little world' you created. It flowed nicely and by the time I finished, I wanted to read more.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Teaser Tuesday!!
ReplyDeleteNice, I like the rehab scenario. Love JR-cocky but awesome!! LOL
Welcome to Teaser Tuesday!!
ReplyDeleteGreat chemistry between these two characters. I want to read on.
I really like how she likes him, but doesn't want to like him at the same time. And "touchy feely crap" is a sweet mish mash :)
ReplyDeleteEek, rehab!
ReplyDeleteNice teaser, I enjoyed it.
I really liked this too. It felt genuine and I look forward to reading more!
ReplyDeleteGood work here. I like this transition into her new setting, her getting comfortable with something she told herself she would hate.
ReplyDeleteI, too, like how you ease your character into this new environment. I wonder how she ended up here, though. I hope to read more soon!
ReplyDeleteYou describe things so well! I could definitely picture it all! Great first teaser!
ReplyDeleteAnd we have the same first name and spelling! I always feel like Karla with a K is so rare :)