Tuesday, January 5, 2010

Happy Teaser Tuesday!!!

Hello All! This is my first Teaser Tuesday. As such, I had my wonderful beta select today's snippet. It comes from my current work-in-progress Broken. It is Skelly's first night in rehab, and as you can imagine, she definitely is not at all sure she wants to be there.

Happy reading!

****snip! snap! thanks for the feedback!!!****

14 comments:

  1. I really pictured it all beautifully! Great writing!

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  2. Yayyy! You know I love this chapter and the tap-tap-tap of her fingers. And JR. I almost forgot about her candy addiction.
    You know who should bring candy when they move in.

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  3. I love Edgy YA and this seems just the thing with the rehab setting and all.

    This line just stuck with me --"All the shooters crave chocolate"

    And wow, that's a charming counseller!

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  4. WOW!! I love this type of YA story, very real. Nice work :)

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  5. Who is this JR creature? I have a thing for bad boys. ;) Glad you joined TT!! :D

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  6. Nice 'strange little world' you created. It flowed nicely and by the time I finished, I wanted to read more.

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  7. Welcome to Teaser Tuesday!!

    Nice, I like the rehab scenario. Love JR-cocky but awesome!! LOL

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  8. Welcome to Teaser Tuesday!!

    Great chemistry between these two characters. I want to read on.

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  9. I really like how she likes him, but doesn't want to like him at the same time. And "touchy feely crap" is a sweet mish mash :)

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  10. Eek, rehab!
    Nice teaser, I enjoyed it.

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  11. I really liked this too. It felt genuine and I look forward to reading more!

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  12. Good work here. I like this transition into her new setting, her getting comfortable with something she told herself she would hate.

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  13. I, too, like how you ease your character into this new environment. I wonder how she ended up here, though. I hope to read more soon!

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  14. You describe things so well! I could definitely picture it all! Great first teaser!

    And we have the same first name and spelling! I always feel like Karla with a K is so rare :)

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