Karla of House Nellenbach, First of Her Name, the Uncool, Queen of Sarcasm, Treadmill Battles, and the First Cup of Coffee, Khalessi of the Great Gray Toyota, Breaker of Lawnmowers, Mother of Dogs (and one Cranky Cat).
These are my words. This is my life. You have been warned.
Yayy pumpkin. I just love this scene. I am editing while I look up Danneel/Jensen wedding photos. So I'm just a sobbing mess. Christ. It's funny in the really pathetic way.
This was very well done. It caught me from the very beginning. It answered my questions as they surfaced. Caught me right from the start. Can't wait to read this. I want to know more about Glory and Hannah and even Doug.
Jack Daniels is no one's friend. LOL She's not nearly as annoyed as I would be if a drunk friend climbed in my window! I like how the beginning sounds like a letter.
HAHA, I liked the whole, "Would I be climbing in your window sober!" LOL. Man, lot of emotion in this snippet. Poor Hannah. And Glory sounds like an awesome character.
"Sometimes, Glory was like a tornado, speeding in and out so quickly you’d never know she’d been there if not for the path of destruction left in her wake." <-- awesome line. Grabbed me right from the start :) I liked "How long before you disappear altogether?" too. As usual, you've got an awesome voice going on, and snappy dialogue!
Yayy pumpkin. I just love this scene. I am editing while I look up Danneel/Jensen wedding photos. So I'm just a sobbing mess. Christ. It's funny in the really pathetic way.
ReplyDeleteThis was very well done. It caught me from the very beginning. It answered my questions as they surfaced. Caught me right from the start. Can't wait to read this. I want to know more about Glory and Hannah and even Doug.
ReplyDeleteI am hooked.
Jack Daniels is no one's friend. LOL She's not nearly as annoyed as I would be if a drunk friend climbed in my window! I like how the beginning sounds like a letter.
ReplyDeleteThe whole snippet was great but I have a crush on the first line. Sounds like my mom, hehe.
ReplyDeleteHAHA, I liked the whole, "Would I be climbing in your window sober!" LOL. Man, lot of emotion in this snippet. Poor Hannah. And Glory sounds like an awesome character.
ReplyDelete"Sometimes, Glory was like a tornado, speeding in and out so quickly you’d never know she’d been there if not for the path of destruction left in her wake." <-- awesome line. Grabbed me right from the start :) I liked "How long before you disappear altogether?" too. As usual, you've got an awesome voice going on, and snappy dialogue!
ReplyDeleteNice characters in this, very distinct. Also very smooth writing, like very natural
ReplyDeleteI was so engaged while I read this. Love the humour and how it so quickly becomes sadness. Very poignant. Amazing tease!
ReplyDeleteLove the first line!! Also lol about good old Jack!
ReplyDeleteI loved this scene. Lots of emotions rolled into it. <3
ReplyDeleteAw, WOW! This scene just totally blew me away. This story always hooks me! :D
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