Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Tease!!

Here's another one from A SLIVER OF HOPE. Enjoy!

**snippy, snippy! thanks for all the love you guys!!**

11 comments:

  1. Yayy pumpkin. I just love this scene. I am editing while I look up Danneel/Jensen wedding photos. So I'm just a sobbing mess. Christ. It's funny in the really pathetic way.

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  2. This was very well done. It caught me from the very beginning. It answered my questions as they surfaced. Caught me right from the start. Can't wait to read this. I want to know more about Glory and Hannah and even Doug.

    I am hooked.

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  3. Jack Daniels is no one's friend. LOL She's not nearly as annoyed as I would be if a drunk friend climbed in my window! I like how the beginning sounds like a letter.

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  4. The whole snippet was great but I have a crush on the first line. Sounds like my mom, hehe.

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  5. HAHA, I liked the whole, "Would I be climbing in your window sober!" LOL. Man, lot of emotion in this snippet. Poor Hannah. And Glory sounds like an awesome character.

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  6. "Sometimes, Glory was like a tornado, speeding in and out so quickly you’d never know she’d been there if not for the path of destruction left in her wake." <-- awesome line. Grabbed me right from the start :) I liked "How long before you disappear altogether?" too. As usual, you've got an awesome voice going on, and snappy dialogue!

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  7. Nice characters in this, very distinct. Also very smooth writing, like very natural

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  8. I was so engaged while I read this. Love the humour and how it so quickly becomes sadness. Very poignant. Amazing tease!

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  9. Love the first line!! Also lol about good old Jack!

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  10. I loved this scene. Lots of emotions rolled into it. <3

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  11. Aw, WOW! This scene just totally blew me away. This story always hooks me! :D

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